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When I was a child, there was a popularity on a toy among childeren.
It used to be sold in supermarkets.
It cosists of a small plastic can and a sillicon insect toy.
It could be bigger if I put some water over and over.
It was like raising an insect.
I bought it in a supermarket near my home.
After arriving at home I began pouring water in it.
And I made the toy bigger and felt satisfied with raising .
But I was getting nervous because I didn't let my mom know about buying the toy.
So I brought it back to the supermarket to get refund.
I lied I didn't use it.
But the cashier noticed it was used. It was too embarrased to forget the situation and the atmoshere of that day.
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안녕하세요. 이태영 전문가입니다.
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When I was a child, there was a popular toy among children.
It used to be sold in supermarkets.
It consisted of a small plastic can and an insect toy made of silicone.
The toy could grow bigger when I added water repeatedly.
It was like raising an insect.
I bought it at a supermarket near my house.
After arriving home, I began pouring water into it.
I made the toy bigger and felt satisfied with raising it.
But I started getting nervous because I hadn't told my mom about buying the toy.
So, I took it back to the supermarket to get a refund.
I lied and said I hadn't used it.
But the cashier noticed it had been used. I was too embarrassed to forget the situation and the atmosphere of that day.
안녕하세요. 손용준 전문가입니다.
When I was a child, there was a populari toy among childeren.
It used to be sold in supermarkets.
It was cosisted of a small plastic can and a sillicon insect toy.
It could be bigger if I fill some water over and over again in it.
It was like raising an insect.
I bought it in a supermarket near my home.
After arriving home I began pouring water in it.
And I made the toy bigger and felt satisfied with raising it.
But I was getting nervous because I didn't let my mom know that I boght the toy.
So I brought it back to the supermarket to get refund.
I lied I didn't use it.
But the cashier noticed it was used. It was too embarrased to forget the situation and the atmoshere of that day.