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When two young men came to see me and I couldn`t for the first time

When they arrived at my home, I definitely opened the door to them with looking at their eyes

We almost spend our time to talked about five hours and separated each other

I set down on my fancy restaurant`s chair and filled up a glass

My mood gotten down very Smoothly in a short time; it makes me feel comfortable

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When two young men came to see me and I couldn`t for the first time

==> I couldn't do anything for the first time.( 조동사 could 다음에 동사원형이 나와야지요) , 아무것도 할 수 없었다

When they arrived at my home, I definitely opened the door to them with looking at their eyes

==> I opened the door and looked them in the eyes.

We almost spend our time to talked about five hours and separated each other

==> We spent five hours talking and said good bye. ( spend는 특성상 시간 다음에 -ing 나옵니다. )

I set down on my fancy restaurant`s chair and filled up a glass

My mood gotten down very Smoothly in a short time; it makes me feel comfortable

==> I felt very smooth in a short time, which made me comfortable.